November Snow
This year snow has arrived early in the month of November. Due to the snow coming early it has caused ciaos all over Britain, where schools have been closed and children have been losing out on their education. Furthermore there has been a commutation lost in the London transport.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is the 50 word article that we had to create. The aim of this was to make sure we had the article written in fifty words.
Kayleigh
ReplyDeleteGood work.
At the moment it is a MERIT.
When you write only 50 words, be sure not to repeat yourself. You have said the snow has come early twice.
Also, check what the word commutation means. I'm not sure it was the word you were meaning to use.
Mr Monahan :-)